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Shroom With A View by Grip
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#1 at BFP 2013 Amiga Compo.
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Submitted by: Grip - Page loaded: 868 - Rating: 8.5 (4 Votes)
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- jok - | 2014-04-14
very nice !
(only fearie anatomy sucks little)
Grip | 2014-04-15
Thanks!
I'd be much happier if you pointed out _what_ sucks about the anatomy and not just _that_ it sucks
- jok - | 2014-04-15
Ok i will try
- she looks flat, more like sticker on glass than part of scene.
there is no perspective nor depth (from light)
legs look strange, like made from clay - giving no impression about 3d

I know whole picture is in comic/tale style, but she flies ! And you are suggesting depth for example in mushroom (this yellow part is too bright imo) and open door
I think if you imagine her in space (perspective) and add light like on flowers (very good btw) it help.

But i like this picture, and that comic style. Respect for Dpaint

sorry for poor english.
Grip | 2014-04-15
Much more valuable input Thanks!
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