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#1 at Solskogen 2012 newschool gfx compo. Details
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- Rating: 9.55 (11 Votes)
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offwhite | 2012-08-08
Your absolutely right about that building. I didn't even see it before now d: I think I might have started out with a different perspective, and at some point I just forgot about that building. I'm not quite sure I understand what's bothering you about the wobbly fence tho'.
I think it's nice to get critique. After a certain amount of time I just can't see my own mistakes anymore, so it's nice to have a fresh pair of eyes. Thanks for pointing it out!
I think it's nice to get critique. After a certain amount of time I just can't see my own mistakes anymore, so it's nice to have a fresh pair of eyes. Thanks for pointing it out!
ALiEN^bf | 2012-08-08
offwhite: You are wrong! 
That odd building is the reason why the boy is looking across to this area. Therefore it is essential!
That odd building is the reason why the boy is looking across to this area. Therefore it is essential!
offwhite | 2012-08-08
Haha, where is the artcity "like" button when you need it?!
mog | 2012-08-10
offwhite: In the lower right, where the fence starts, the element next to it.
I really love the pic, just felt to have to give a comment why it's not a 10 in my opinion.
Aliens idea is neat though, maybe a space time hole - that distorts perspective and is about to swallow that building
FWIW I flip my pics horizontally, vertically after some time, it helps to see rough spots more easy. Sometimes these new perspectives also lead to a totally new picture when doing logos
Keep it up!
I really love the pic, just felt to have to give a comment why it's not a 10 in my opinion.
Aliens idea is neat though, maybe a space time hole - that distorts perspective and is about to swallow that building
FWIW I flip my pics horizontally, vertically after some time, it helps to see rough spots more easy. Sometimes these new perspectives also lead to a totally new picture when doing logos
Keep it up!
offwhite | 2013-01-14
I'm pretty sure that wobbly fence was due to free beer from Outracks 
The only things that irks me a bit is the perspective of the buildings in the background, the taller building just looks off. The fence also looks a bit wobbly. But who am I to actually criticize it. Lovely image!